Wednesday, 3 June 2015

Adding detail to my story.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

What a lovely weekend you had Matthew. Love from Oupa and Ouma in South Africa

Mrs D said...

Well done Matthew. Your work shows that you are mostly able to add enough detail to your writing. Remember that the more detail that you add, the better your story will be. So try not to be in a rush to finish.